English is not my first langue and the lack of finely polished prose when crafting my reviews is the sole thing holding this community back. In order to not further subject you fine people to my peasant words, I decided to employ the help of an artificial ghostwriter to spruce up my works for this week’s Midweek Discussion. At least that was my initial course of action, but as hillarious as the results were it doesn’t leave much space open for discussion. So I decided to do start a little quiz instead. I spruce up light novel titles instead for you all to guess:

  1. “I have ascended to unparalleled strength, wielding diminutive incantations to obliterate all opposition.”
  2. “The leisurely adventures of a seasoned herder, who has embarked upon her journey at an unconventional juncture in time.”
  3. “Culinary Adventures: Preparing Delectable Dishes from Exotic Game Ingredients”
  4. “A Symphonic Odyssey through the Land of the Afterlife: A Tale of Perilous Travel to an Altered Universe.”
  5. “Tired of this languid existence? Having been reborn as a preeminent Elven being, my current state is one of profound ennui.”

This should be enough to get the guessing going. Feel free to add your own so that I get to guess as well. (prompt was simply "Rewirte the following to make it sound more eloquent: [TITLE]”)

edit: Answers:

spoiler
  1. I Became the Strongest and Annihilated Everything With Low-Level Spells (I left out the "Failure Frame” because the AI kept it unchanged)
  2. A Late-Start Tamer’s Laid-Back Life (yeah, don’t ask me where the journey in a unconventional time stuff came from)
  3. Cooking with Wild Game
  4. Death March to the Parallel World Rhapsody (love the Rhapsody turning into “Symphonic Odyssey” and thought it would be the easiest to guess because of it)
  5. Enough with This Slow Life! I Was Reincarnated as a High Elf and Now I’m Bored (Ennui is my new favorite word)
  • Lvxferre@ani.socialEnglish
    3·
    4 months ago
    Guessing the ones from the OP
    1. Failure Frame.
    2. No idea. [after seeing answer] From tamer to herder… eh. I wouldn’t guess it ever.
    3. Cooking with Wild Game. Fuck, I love this series.
    4. No idea. [after seeing answer] Yeah, nah, no way to guess it.
    5. I don’t recall the exact name, but the high elf in question gets bored after 120 years. There’s a manga adaptation in my “to read” list that has been there since forever.

    I tried a few but they’re a bit too obvious:

    1. Unemployed Rebirth
    2. Seasoning and Canine
    3. Rising as a Bibliophile: I Shall Endeavor by Any Means to Attain the Title of Librarian!
    answers for the above
    1. Jobless Reincarnation (Mushoku Tensei)
    2. Spice and Wolf
    3. Ascendance of a Bookworm: I’ll do Anything to Become a Librarian!
  • wjs018@ani.socialEnglish
    3·
    4 months ago

    Alright, I haven’t read nearly as much as some of you more seasoned LN veterans, but I think I have an idea on a couple:

    Guesses

    1 - No idea, but the concept of shortening or removing chants from magic has come up in so many isekai I have consumed that I would be impressed if somebody gets it.

    3 - Campfire Cooking - I read the manga and watched the anime. Love this series.

    5 - I Was Reborn and Became a High Elf, but I Got Tired of My Slow Life after 120 Years - I never read this series, but remember seeing the title in the manga subreddit. Long, overly descriptive LN titles got me this one.

    Also, side note:

    English is not my first langue

    Really could have fooled me.

    • NineSwords@ani.socialOPMEnglish
      3·
      4 months ago

      5 is correct and 3 might as well, since your guess fits better than the original input.

      I’ll wait a day or so and then post the answers in a spoiler.

      Really could have fooled me.

      Thank you kindly.

  • I2jgwh0hYtxrCZQ@lemmy.sdf.orgMEnglish
    2·
    4 months ago

    I recognised a few but didn’t remember the names so I had to look them up.

    Number 1

    Failure Frame: I became the strongest and Annihilated Everything With Low-Level Spells

    Number 2

    No Idea

    Number 3

    Cooking With Wild Game

    Number 4

    No Idea

    Number 5

    Enough with this slow life! I was reincarnated as a high elf and now I’m bored

      • I2jgwh0hYtxrCZQ@lemmy.sdf.orgMEnglish
        3·
        4 months ago

        After seeing the answers it’s a lot more obvious.

        Maybe it’s the difference between native speakers and people with 2nd languages.

        There are a lot of words people who speak English as a second language use but I didn’t even know existed. Like “Please do the needful” , I would normally say “Please do …” or “Please do what is required”. But a lot of 2nd language speakers seem to use needful.

        So maybe there’s some connection people who know multiple languages make when learning which I haven’t. (Or more likely I am just oblivious)

        Original post - And your language skills are very good. I can’t judge anyone when I can barely speak my native language and don’t know any others

        • NineSwords@ani.socialOPMEnglish
          3·
          4 months ago

          I never heard the term “needful” and had to look it up. I would say “please do what’s neccesary” for example.

          I would guess that the people who actually use “needful" are those who are mostly translating word for word via dictionary or dumb MTL but doesn’t have much real contact with the language, which would clue them in that using that term, while technically correct, is not used in normal discussions. <- I also did not break up this sentence just to point out the main problem I have when writing in English. I’m perfectly aware that those nested sentences are beyond reasonable and that I have to break them up to make them easier to follow.

          • wjs018@ani.socialEnglish
            3·
            4 months ago

            The majority of my coworkers are non-native English speakers and I find that needful is most commonly used by colleagues originally from India. So, I have always assumed it is a common way of phrasing that kind of sentence in Hindi or Tamil (or any of the loads of other languages commonly spoken in the subcontinent) and they are mentally translating it directly.

            Edit: An example from my life is that I used to live in the Southwestern US and spoke in Spanish with native Spanish speakers, but I would often mess up things like word order or phrases because I was translating in my head from English. As an example, to say “I am hungry” in Spanish is “tengo hambre” (lit. I have hunger). However, I would do something like start the sentence with “Yo soy…” (lit. I am) instead because that is how I would say it in English.

      • I2jgwh0hYtxrCZQ@lemmy.sdf.orgMEnglish
        2·
        4 months ago

        How about these?

        Rewirte the following to make it sound less eloquent:

        Number 1 - I have ascended to unparalleled strength, wielding diminutive incantations to obliterate all opposition

        I’ve gotten really strong and can use small spells to crush my enemies.

        Number 2 - The leisurely adventures of a seasoned herder, who has embarked upon her journey at an unconventional juncture in time

        The laid-back story of an experienced herder, who started her journey at a weird time.

        Number 3 - Culinary Adventures: Preparing Delectable Dishes from Exotic Game Ingredients

        Cooking Fun: Making Yummy Meals from Unusual Game Meat

        Number 4 - A Symphonic Odyssey through the Land of the Afterlife: A Tale of Perilous Travel to an Altered Universe

        A Musical Journey in the Afterlife: A Story of Dangerous Trips to a Different World

        Number 5 - Tired of this languid existence? Having been reborn as a preeminent Elven being, my current state is one of profound ennui

        Fed up with this boring life? As a top Elven now, I’m feeling really bored.

  • I2jgwh0hYtxrCZQ@lemmy.sdf.orgMEnglish
    2·
    4 months ago

    Here are some for you.

    Hard Mode - Future Releases

    1 - The darkness of hell knows no blooms.

    2 - Disney’s Twisted-Wonderland: The Reign of the Rose-Red Tyrant

    3 - The Gift of Life: Spare This Enchanted Disappointment!

    4 - Might Beyond Measure! Exiled to a Different Realm!

    Answers

    Rewrite the following to make them sound more eloquent: 1 - HELL IS DARK WITH NO FLOWERS 2 - Disney Twisted-Wonderland: Rose-Red Tyrant 3 - The Blessing of Liefe: Leave This Magical Letdown Alone! 4 - TOO STRONG TO BELONG! BANISHED TO ANOTHER WORLD!

    Normal Mode -

    1 - Is It Inappropriate to Attempt Courting Maidens in a Dungeon?

    2 - The Rogue Dreams Not of Father Christmas

    3 - My Unmatched Lethal Skill Renders All in this Alternate Realm Helpless Before Me!

    4 - Aspiring for a Leisurely Existence? A Manual for Navigating Life in the Untamed Wilderness

    5 - Through a Quirk of Destiny, I Find Myself Enrolled in the Royal Academy in Disguise

    Answers

    Rewrite the following to make them sound more eloquent: 1 - IS IT WRONG TO TRY TO PICK UP GIRLS IN A DUNGEON? 2 - RASCAL DOES NOT DREAM OF SANTA CLAUS 3 - MY INSTANT DEATH ABILITY IS SO OVERPOWERED, NO ONE IN THIS OTHER WORLD STANDS A CHANCE AGAINST ME! 4 - SO YOU WANT TO LIVE THE SLOW LIFE? A GUIDE TO LIFE IN THE BEASTLY WILDS 5 - BY A TWIST OF FATE, I’M ATTENDING THE ROYAL ACADEMY IN DISGUISE

    • NineSwords@ani.socialOPMEnglish
      2·
      4 months ago

      I don’t know any of the future releases.

      For normal mode:

      spoiler
      1. DanMachi
      2. Pass (edit after reading the answers: I was sure that it was rascal does not dream… but I don’t follow the series and I know only the parts that got an anime adaptation, so the “christmas" was throwing me off)
      3. My Instant Death Ability Is Overpowered
      4. So You Want to Live the Slow Life? A Guide to Life in the Beastly Wilds
      5. Pass

      That’s actually harder than I thought. Thanks for giving me some to guess!

      • I2jgwh0hYtxrCZQ@lemmy.sdf.orgMEnglish
        2·
        4 months ago

        For future releases I just took some from the LNReleases list. I didn’t know any of them.

        Normal - Number 2

        I think it’s another one that hasn’t been released but as I recognised Rascal I added it to normal.